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Farewell, oh precious little children.
Our hearts are filled with grief.
You leave behind the love of a nation,
And lives that, to us, were too brief.

Perhaps the powers that be understand
Why you were called home so soon.
But we mere mortals cannot conceive
How you danced away to a mad man's tune.

Our tears have stained the world this day,
And our heads are bent in prayer
For loved ones who'll miss you most of all,
For your loss is a lifetime burden to bear.
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This is in sympathy for the children and families of the Connecticut school massacre.
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:iconcrunchbandicoot:
~CrunchBandicoot Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a powerful, heartfelt poem. It should be used for a real memorial.
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*Melalina Dec 21, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you, I'm still feeling it. Thanks for the fave too.
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~TruthisTruth Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have never found, and never will find again, such a perfect piece of poetry. This is beautiful. You've done well honoring the little children. :happycry:
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*Melalina Dec 17, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much and for the fave.
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~TruthisTruth Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome.
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~Fallingstarz5 Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Beautiful. It makes me cry just thinking about something that horrific.......and that 20 children were killed is just unimaginable....
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~HaniaJedi Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful!
It's really nice how people are making tributes like these to them. :)
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*Melalina Dec 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you. The situation begs an outpouring of sympathy.
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~HaniaJedi Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
It's pretty big. It's been on CNN since it happened.
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:iconxxdiminikxx:
It's beautiful. :'D
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